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Old 12-19-2003, 05:41 PM
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Old 12-20-2003, 07:15 AM
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Zindagi mauj hai kinara nahin

Tu nahin tera isstiaara nahin
Aasman per koi sitara nahin
Voh merey samney sey guzra tha
Phir bhi main chop raha……pokara nahin
Voh nahin milta aek bar hameyn
Aur yeh zindagi dobarah nahin
Har samander ka aek sahel hai
Hijr ki raat ka kinara nahin
Ho sakey to aek nigah kar leyna
Tum peh kuch zoar hamara nahin
Naao oolti to yeh hoa maaloom
Zindagi mauj hai kinara nahin.
ZINDGI KA AIK SHEHR LAIKEN SORRY KAI SATH.

ZINDGI AIK JANOON HAI,PATHI HOI PATLOON HAI.
TAKIAN LAGATAI JAO, ZINDGI BANATAI JAO.
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Old 12-20-2003, 07:38 AM
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Old 12-20-2003, 10:51 AM
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Waleykum Asalaam,
Aap ka khiyaal to neyk hai. Urdu software key zarey post bheyjney ki vaqai baat hi kuch aur hai. Inshallah jald hi main urdu software key zariey post bheyjoon gi.
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Old 12-20-2003, 10:59 AM
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ZINDGI KA AIK SHEHR LAIKEN SORRY KAI SATH.

ZINDGI AIK JANOON HAI,PATHI HOI PATLOON HAI.
TAKIAN LAGATAI JAO, ZINDGI BANATAI JAO.
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Aap ney to zindagee ka tajzia kya khob kya.
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Old 12-21-2003, 06:24 PM
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Thanks Faheem.
Ghazal bohat pasand aai. Mazeed posts ka inteyzaar rahey ga.
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Old 12-21-2003, 06:27 PM
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buhat khoob Maha Hasan
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Is sey pehley key beyvafa ho jaaeyn
Kyoon na aaey doost joda ho jaaeyn
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Shukria Ratan.
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Old 12-21-2003, 06:30 PM
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ghazal

Ghazal
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Meri tasveer mein rang aur kisi ka to nahi
Gheyr lein mujh ko sub aankhein main tamasha to nahi

Zindagi tujh sey her ik saans pe sumjhota keroon
Shoaq jiney ka hai mujh ko mager itna to nahi

Rooh ko dard mila dard ko aankhein na milein
Tujh ko mehsoos kiya hai tujhey dekha to nahi

Soochtey soochtey dil dobney lagta hai mera
Zhen ki teh mein MUZAFAR koi darya to nahi.
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Old 12-24-2003, 12:14 PM
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Charaagh mangtey rehney ka...

Meri taraf sey ik aur ghazal.
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Charaagh mangtey rehney ka kuch sabub bhi nahi
Andheyrey keysey batain key ab shab bhi nahi

Main apney zoaam meinik baazyaft per khosh hoon
Yeh vaqiya hai key mujh ko mila vo ab bhi nahi

Jo merey sheyroon mein mujh sey ziyada bolta hai
Mein is ki bazm mein ik horf-e-zeyr-e-lab bhi nahi

Aur ab to zindagi kerney key sou tariqey hain
Hum is key hijr mein tanha rahey they jab bhi nahi

Yeh dastakeen, yeh meri zindagi ki aadhee raat
Hava ka shoar samujh lo to kuch aajab bhi nahi

Yeh dookh nahi key andheyroon sey solah ki hum ney
Malaal yeh hai key ab sobha ki talab bhi nahi

Hisaab darbadri tujh sey maang sakta hai
Ghareeb-e-shehr mger itna bey adab bhi nahi

Hamein bohat hai, yeh sadaat-e-ashq ki nisbat
Key yeh qabila koi aysa kum nasab bhi nahi
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Old 12-24-2003, 09:42 PM
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nice ...
buhat achi choice hai aapki ...
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Old 12-25-2003, 02:02 AM
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Salaam Maha Sister

Aap Ki Yeh Ghazal Bohat Achi Hai Wah Wah Maza Aa gaya Hai keep it up sis (Y)
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Very nice effort.
BUT PLZ TRY TO WRITE IT IN URDU LANGUAGE.
WAITING>>>>!!!!
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Old 12-26-2003, 10:37 AM
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Very nice effort.
BUT PLZ TRY TO WRITE IT IN URDU LANGUAGE.
WAITING>>>>!!!!
Thanks usman raza attari.
I'll try to write through URDU software.
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Old 12-27-2003, 02:55 AM
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Assalam Walekum,
Bohat hi acchi hain bohat hi acchi
keep it up
bye
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Old 12-27-2003, 10:57 AM
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Assalam Walekum,
Bohat hi acchi hain bohat hi acchi
keep it up
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Waleykum-Asalaam,
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Old 12-29-2003, 07:41 AM
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AABLA

Odaasi key ofaq per jab tumhari yaad key jugno chamaktey hain
Tu meri rooh per hijr ka rkha hoa pather
Chamakti berf ki soorat pighalta hai
Ager cha yoon pighalney sey ye pather sangreyza to nahi banta
Mger ik hosla sa dil ko hota hai
key jeysey ser ba ser tareeq shab mein bhi
Ager ik zard-o-sehma hoa tara nikal aaey
To qaatil raat ka bey-aism jaado toot jata hai
Mosafir key safer ka rasta to kum nahi hota
Mger taarey ki chilman sey
Koi bhola hoa manzar achanak jagmagata hai
Solagtey paaon mein ik aabla sa phoot jata hai.
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Old 12-30-2003, 04:43 AM
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Woh khuwab tha, bikhar giya, khiyaal tha mila nahi
Magar dil ko kiya huwa, yeh kiyu bujha, pata nahi
Har ek din udaas din tamaam shab udasiyaan
Kisi se kiya bichar gaya kai jaisay kuch bacha nahi
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