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Old 10-29-2004, 06:43 AM
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Asal men humare Admin sahab ko afsane ke do lafzon azaarband aur shalwar ....pe aitaraz hai ...kiyonki ye insani zahan per khastaur per urdupages ke naujawan aur kam umar ke membaran ke zahan per ghalat asarat murattab karte hain ....
Meri rai hai ki Shalwar aur azarband donon per pabandee laga kar kuch aur chiz ijaad ki jaye jo fahsh na ho ....ya in ka nam badal kar ....kaddo ki bhujiya aur moong ki daal sulemani rakh do jisse kisee ke zahan per ghalt asar na pade.
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vaise sach baat to yeh hai ke abhi admin ki nazar hi nahi pari hai yahaan per is liye hum aap chup hi rahen to behtar hai.

minto ke afsaanay ka koi bhi lafz nahi badalna chahiye. voh jaisa hai us ko us hi tarah yahaan pesh karna chahiye.

is afsaanay ko parhnay ki himmat koi pakkay zehan ka insaan hi kar sakta hai. chhotay bachchay ko pehlay hi paragraph mein ukta jaayen ge.

to mera khyaal hai ke yeh jaisa hai is ko aisa hi rehnay diya jaaye to behtar hai.
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Old 10-29-2004, 11:18 AM
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Admin Zone me maine yeh baatein likhi thein... socha k yahan bhi wohi sab arz kar dun... to lijiye mulahiza kijiye...


isme shuba nahi k MANTO lasani afsana'nigaar tha aur uske taqreeban tamam hi afsaane lazwaal tehreerein hain.... par...
baat yeh hai k ...
yeh ek akhlaqi usool hai k admi ko hamesha yaad rakhna chaahiye k kaunsi baat kahan aur kis tareeqe se ki jani chaahiye...
zahir hai hum gup'shup masjid me baith kar nahi kar sakte ... isi tarah cinema'hall me baith kar deeni masaayel par mobahisa jari nahi kar sakte hain...

Manto k afsaane lazwaal sahi aur hum uske afsaano k kitne hi barhe FAN sahi... (badqismati se mai bhi Manto ka parastaar hun... )... par dekha jana chaahiye k uska kaunsa afsana yahan urdupages.com par pesh kiye jane k qaabil hai??

Manto ghalat hai ya Asmat ghalat hain... yeh hamari behas ka nuqta-e-nazar nahi hai.
balke mai yeh kehna chaah raha hun k
jo baat aap aur mai milkar kisi hotel me chaaye peete huye karte hain... kya usi topic par hum apni family me maslan maa, baap, bhai, behen etc. k sath mil baith discuss kar sakte hain ??
kya aap "Khol Do" jaise afsane par apne waalideen se discussion kar sakte hain??
ek had tak ho sakta hai, k kar sakte hun... par kya apne se bahot hi kam-umr bhai behnou se is afsaane par baat kar sakte hain??

ummeed hai aap sab meri baat samajh rahe honge...
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AoA Dosto!
Admin Zone me maine yeh baatein likhi thein... socha k yahan bhi wohi sab arz kar dun... to lijiye mulahiza kijiye...


isme shuba nahi k MANTO lasani afsana'nigaar tha aur uske taqreeban tamam hi afsaane lazwaal tehreerein hain.... par...
baat yeh hai k ...
yeh ek akhlaqi usool hai k admi ko hamesha yaad rakhna chaahiye k kaunsi baat kahan aur kis tareeqe se ki jani chaahiye...
zahir hai hum gup'shup masjid me baith kar nahi kar sakte ... isi tarah cinema'hall me baith kar deeni masaayel par mobahisa jari nahi kar sakte hain...

Manto k afsaane lazwaal sahi aur hum uske afsaano k kitne hi barhe FAN sahi... (badqismati se mai bhi Manto ka parastaar hun... )... par dekha jana chaahiye k uska kaunsa afsana yahan urdupages.com par pesh kiye jane k qaabil hai??

Manto ghalat hai ya Asmat ghalat hain... yeh hamari behas ka nuqta-e-nazar nahi hai.
balke mai yeh kehna chaah raha hun k
jo baat aap aur mai milkar kisi hotel me chaaye peete huye karte hain... kya usi topic par hum apni family me maslan maa, baap, bhai, behen etc. k sath mil baith discuss kar sakte hain ??
kya aap "Khol Do" jaise afsane par apne waalideen se discussion kar sakte hain??
ek had tak ho sakta hai, k kar sakte hun... par kya apne se bahot hi kam-umr bhai behnou se is afsaane par baat kar sakte hain??

ummeed hai aap sab meri baat samajh rahe honge...
a o a,


mey iss baat sey itafaq kerti hun jab mey ney yeh perha tu apnay comment karna bhi munasib nahi samjhaa.......

kyun key har umer key loog iss site ko visit kertey hain aur teenage mey aisee baatain perhna sahi nahi.... mey iss tarahan key afsanaooun key against hun......

mana yeh afsaney pakey damagh walay per saktey hain bachgana damagh iss baat ko hazam nahi ker saktey

aur mujhey perh ker herat huee thee key urdu pages mey issa afsana aur shorrow ki posts mey sab iss ko pasand ker rahay hain.......

gis time ka yeh afsana manzar peesh kerta hai tab bohat zada aisee batain huey but duhrana shaid munasib nahi woh bhi aik achi site per....

ager kisi ki dil azari ho tu mazrat khua hun.
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